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Annotated by:
- Nixon, Lois LaCivita
- Date of entry: Dec-10-2015
Summary
The physician-narrator is looking in on a 30 year old
patient named Ricky. Readers immediately
learn that the patient has cerebral palsy:
his ear mashed flat, his neck contorted into a tight C, almost
quadriplegic. These first stanza clinical
observations are indisputable. The
narrator then shifts from the medical facts to more subjective thoughts ranging
from Ricky’s previous treatment responses and medications to Ricky’s adult heterosexual
response to the proximity of a female, and finally to the narrator’s own wishes
for this patient. Ricky’s parents, the narrator notes, have similarly
but uncomfortably witnessed their son’s ogling response to a pretty nurse or
doctor or a provocative adult television
image. The parents’ response, he notes, to these observations has been to redirect Ricky’s
focus by switching the channel to Nickelodeon, a program geared towards
children.
Not unlike situations in several writings by William Carlos
Williams, this physician has moved from objective medical information to his
own interior thoughts about Ricky’s circumstances and confinement. Rather than sticking with the facts associated
with the patient’s medical condition, he wonders, imagines, and expresses in
this poem seemingly un-doctorly thoughts.
Primary Source
House Calls, Rounds, and Healings: A Poetry Casebook
Publisher
Galen Press, Ltd
Place Published
Tucson, Arizona
Edition
1996
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