Summary

In this wonderful short story, author Jeanette Brown describes a woman’s first visit to an alternative medicine healer. The woman has a persistent cough. Unhappy with the "five seconds per visit your doctor lavishes on you after your two-hour wait in his sterile lobby," she has taken her yoga instructor’s advice and made an appointment with a tall, olive-skinned man whose voice is "low and soothing" and whose manner is slow, relaxed, and personal.The woman, whom the healer diagnoses as "the roadrunner, a busy fidgety type," alternates between interest, skepticism and dismay. She cracks jokes; he doesn’t laugh. He recommends diet, exercise, no caffeine, and colon cleansing. She mentally rolls her eyes until, his hands massaging her foot, she feels her stomach lurch, a twinge in her armpit and begins to think of her body as "a human pinball machine." Whenever her self-defensive, rational, traditional beliefs almost propel her off the exam table and into her clothes, the healer "nails" her, reading her personality and her lifestyle exactly.Well into the visit, she realizes she hasn’t coughed once. Then, when she’s the most relaxed, incense wafting, his hands kneading all tensions from her back, her mind registering "this is bliss," her esophagus becomes blocked. Sitting up, she coughs, and the healer confronts her. "You have something to say," he insists, and she counters with "You expect me to believe all this mumbo-jumbo?" He tells her she swallows her feelings, and when she coughs again a "feather? A butterfly?" escapes from her mouth and disappears.When the healer pats her back and asks her to cough once more, she can’t. Taking her hands, he declares her "cured." At the story’s end, still not quite able to admit that this strange physician has helped her, yet knowing that he has, the woman struggles to count out his fifty dollar fee, finally dropping a handful of bills onto his bench, "hoping he won’t be offended by a tip."

Commentary

This well-crafted story looks at the short-comings of traditional medicine and, at the same time, examines alternative medicine with both humor and respect. In addition to its important topic, the story is enhanced by the author’s literary skill: Brown presents setting, dialogue, and the internal struggle between traditional beliefs and a patient’s exploration of new territory with style. The patient’s back and forth internal dialogue rings absolutely true. And the author "nails" traditional medicine’s lapses just as precisely as the healer pinned down his reluctant patient’s problem. Sometimes, the author suggests, traditional medicine swallows its feelings as well.

Primary Source

The Bellevue Literary Review, 2(2): 80, 2002

Publisher

Department of Medicine, New York University School of Medicine

Place Published

New York

Edition

Fall 2002

Editor

Danielle Ofri

Page Count

7